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by ~MadPrinceFeanor, Aug 3, 2012, 4:30:10 PM
Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Free Verse

I belong
to the red earth now
and not the green.

It has stained my fish-scale skin
to beaten bronze
and stripped my autumn hair
to ashen gold.

All that remains
is the blue of my eyes--
not azure
not cerulean
but blue-blue;
the color of a perfect sky
no matter where it's seen.

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The Perfect CrimeRed on the carpet,
Staining the floor,
A blade in your hand,
And a hunger for more.
A dangerous game,
But you've never been caught.
When breaking a heart,
You're harder to spot.
You look into her eyes,
With a murderous grin,
But killing one's love,
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Please ignore the stars, as the real critique is as follows. Vision The title of "The Perfect Crime" fits well with the twist; we know...

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Grandmother Spider Bears the Weight of the SunDecember.
The solstice smells of wet soil.

A rising sea of dusk washes over her,
pressing on her mind
like her fingers press the lump of clay in her palm.
Grandmother keeps her hands busy,
forces nervous tremors into the small vessel
emerging like a snake
from the earth.

A bundle of flowers had held the sweat of her hands.
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Vision As you say in your comments, your vision with this piece was to bridge the gap between poetry and prose by making the piece soun...

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the sevenfather, we seek your justice;
mother, your mercy and love.
smith, give the strength to persist;
maiden, grant grace of the dove.
warrior, we beg courage;
crone, shine guidance from above.

and silent stranger,
open myst'ry's door for us
when our death has come.

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*Scarlettletters 5 days ago Professional Writer

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~MadPrinceFeanor 1 day ago Professional Writer

Anytime.

~LucyFaerie Jun 9, 2013

You're welcome.

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~MadPrinceFeanor Jun 6, 2013 Professional Writer

You are most welcome.

*Yamigirl21 May 24, 2013

Thanks for the fav!

~MadPrinceFeanor May 24, 2013 Professional Writer

You're very welcome, thank you for the beautiful art!

~LucyFaerie May 7, 2013

Thank you.

~yeahgirl11 May 3, 2013 Student Traditional Artist

Stephanie sent me here.

Just wanted to let you know that I'm praying for you. Stay strong.

~MadPrinceFeanor May 4, 2013 Professional Writer

Thank you.

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