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Posterite - PosterityUne aube écarlate par-delà l'horizon
Une mer de larmes à mes pieds
Le prix de l'éternité

A scarlet dawn beyond the horizon
A sea of tears at my feet
The cost of Eternity
Shiranu jibun戦場に
壊れた武器で
潔く
両手で襲う
知らぬ自分を

Senjou ni
Kowareta buki de
Isagiyoku
Ryoute de osou
Shiranu jibun wo

On the battlefield
With a broken weapon
Manly
Both-handedly attacks
Unknown self
*Bird Talk*True, do not speak bird
But hear their talk every day
Screaming on the wing
Intimate tweets in the trees
Bird business is delightful

2013 Delice1941
14th June2013
RelativityIt is three sixteen
and I am thinking how long
fifteen minutes is.
Challenge Haiku 51 - LampShatters to pieces
Darkness consumes everything
Chaos runs amok
On stronde gebidende...     Ic wæs bé wiellum        under wealde
eallán on sonde        sǽ on feorran.
Wíd byð þæt strond        long byð stunde
oft mé má lengra        þúhte lárstunde.
Challenge Haiku 52 - SlapSharp sting on his cheek
Face lit red as an apple
Foolishness repaid
Haiku: To That Special SomeoneI never had one.
But if I needed to choose,
my best friend is you.

Even when I’m sad,
your cheerfulness and whimsy
always make me smile.

Taking the somber,
you make it a comedy.
I can’t stop laughing.

Soft melodies drift.
I hear your words through head phones.
They rest in my heart.

Every chance meeting,
greeted with smiles and a hug,
gave me so much hope.

My first one true love
was given, taken, and killed
by the author’s pen.

I am player one.
You are always player two.
Because I said so.

Remember the day
you told them to stop laughing?
I still remember.

Your great optimism
will never fail to inspire.
Yes, carpe die
The BirdI envy the bird
Who flies away in winter
And returns in spring.
Bleach - haikuObłąkany śmiech
Ostrze wiatrem niesione
Zupełnie inny

***

Dwie cyfry cudze
Strach w mieczu wyuczony
Zdrada bolesna

***

Uśmiech nieszczery
Serce skryte głęboko
Błękit w błękicie

***

Imię honoru
Ostrze prawem niesione
Samotny księżyć

***

Dusza wesoła
Delikatny kwiat walki
Serce na dłoni

***

Zakazany dom
Skromne słowa mądrości
Siła poznania

***

Duma dzikości
Radość śmiertelnej walki
Król bez poddanych

***

Ciche spojrzenie
Lojalność niezachwiana
Siła rozpaczy

***

Urok zmysłowy
Lekk
Wasted
Far from the showroom,
touched by decay's sea change
-an art object found?
Beginner Tanka'sA Hero Sacrifice

A life in my hands
what should one do with a soul
replace it with mine?
life for a life is nature  
as there is spring and winter

A Sakura Eternity

rosy petal falls
silent in it's own beauty
yet unknown in time
for that light to shine in grace
there shall always be a spring

A Natural Tree

Long branches reaching
seemingly into the sky
trying to reach stars
rooted into the earth core
ancient and immortal soul

My image of a Lady

Her face is pleasant
containing warmth of mothers
jokes of a jester
independent as the fox
light as the eternal sky  

As Sun set Fall's

As low Light seeps down
The Darkness moves upward
ImpendWater and the Earth.
The spirits that rule us all.
Malevolence kills.
Assassin's Creed Haiku1.
Here comes a Templar
Veri Pazzi, long-time foe
I love history
2.
I love history
Italy’s nooks and crannies
The Renaissance age
3.
The Renaissance age
Italy’s best and greatest
I seek adventure
4.
I seek adventure
Within the Renaissance age
Assassin’s Creed Two
FlyingFlying high and far

I'm out of my precious skin

And frail skeleton
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Careless: DFC2012 9

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The ungrateful child,
thorn that stabs his mother's flesh;
what to do with him?

         Loosen his bindings
         and freed, ask of his parents
         how he became such.

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Careless: DFC2012 9by ~MadPrinceFeanor

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:iconprojectdfc: day 9 - sedoka.

The Sedoka is a Japanese form. It centres around the
idea of Questions and Answers. The syllabic count is
that of haiku (5,7,5) and there are 6 lines, 3 in each
stanza. The content can be of any theme but one
must question or mention something in the first, and
then either contradict or answer in the second. It's all
about leaving you guessing and making people think.

December 9th is International Children's Day.
©2012-2013 ~MadPrinceFeanor
Category: Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Haiku & Eastern

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Critique by ~Michel-le-fou Dec 14, 2012, 9:17:47 PM
Very short and blunt. I feel that I would have added details if I wrote it.The comparison with a thorn in one's side was an effective idea though. The next three lines are a puzzle. But it is true that when children make mistakes, we think about their parents. As this stands, it makes its point. I ask simply to make it longer. Describe how the boy is a thorn in his mother's flesh, and then what happens after freeing him. Re-submit under a new title, if you like. [In any case, I usually write full form poetry, so you are free to follow this advice.]
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