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My new beautiful
disenchanted soul
smells like dog
and damp cigarettes
puffed in the secrecy
of an abandoned room
so empty that the softest sound
echoes like a crash.
The electricity is shut off;
the only light
flares then glows
as you inhale
and for just a moment
your eyes shine
like you haven't been through hell--
then all goes dark.
disenchanted soul
smells like dog
and damp cigarettes
puffed in the secrecy
of an abandoned room
so empty that the softest sound
echoes like a crash.
The electricity is shut off;
the only light
flares then glows
as you inhale
and for just a moment
your eyes shine
like you haven't been through hell--
then all goes dark.
A poem about someone who is beautiful to me.
Critique is ALWAYS welcome, even if I don't have the nifty subscriber option for it anymore.
Critique is ALWAYS welcome, even if I don't have the nifty subscriber option for it anymore.
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It's been 9 years and I'm still crazy about this. Such an incredible poem.