I will be honest when I start this and say that poetry is hardly my forte and I don't even really recall the proper styles, formats, or "rules" of the various different types. So, in that, I doubt I'm best to really judge it on those levels. Yet, as for the emotional side of it and the actual words "penned" I can definitely say they are at the least, moving. I think that even if such writings were not directly/indirectly [since it's technically for my character, but that pretty much means me in a sense, no? lol] meant for me in any specific degree that it'd be very moving. Because it speaks of lovers separated and the romantic sense of longing, star-crossed lovers, and passion. The pain we feel when we're separated from the ones we love so very much and how we just ache to hold them in our arms. Absence definitely does make the heart grow fonder...stronger. The sweet, soft tenderness of knowing that however long the separation maybe in the end that someone WILL be waiting. There is elegance and poetry itself to the words without being so flowery as to make it come across more as corny or silly, instead being more honest and more as subtle as a whisper to the stars hoping that the separated partner hears the words in their dark hours....a romantic notion that one can only hope is felt more in the world...that loving, longing loyal mate aching with promise of awaiting the bliss of being alongside you once more.